Thursday 11 December 2014

Storyboard Correction

With this one the composition is a bit off, i should move the closest character a little bit to the right so hat his face is in with the line and i should move the furthest character more to the right allowing more space in the middle and better composition. Could use a high angle on this



 
With this one i just need to move the background characters more to the left for better composition 
I should move him more to the right to give him some head room/eye room 








The furthest character should be move to the other side to allow space in the middle and for better composition also use a low angle to show they have more power in this situation  


I should of framed this more to the left for better composition and to make it fell like there is motion 


Use a higher angle to show vulnerability 


This one is framed too much in the middle so if i move it to the left the the composition would be better 


Same problem with this one if i move it to the left the composition would be better 




I need to move this more to the left so there is more leg room and better composition





Should move the character furthest away more to the right to make the composition better 






Should of moved character more to the right for better composition 




Should frame this more to the left for better composition and to apply with the 180 degree rule  




I should use a higher angle to show that the character is situation he cannot handle and his vulnerable 














Should frame this more to the left for better composition 






Should move the frame more to the left to make look more professional and have better composition

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