Very thorough in terms of information - the presentation could be imporved by adding in video and image of what you are analysing. So where you address titles - add in images of this.
It is not clear who has done what - need to see who has contrinuted and where.
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ReplyDeleteVery thorough in terms of information - the presentation could be imporved by adding in video and image of what you are analysing. So where you address titles - add in images of this.
It is not clear who has done what - need to see who has contrinuted and where.