Some really good shots used and a sense of flow. The titles demonstrate creativity and skill. As a work in progress this has a lot of potential but runs the risk of not being finished in all aspects of technical skills - ensure this is completed to deadline.
To improve: Sound is your priority Add the missing titles Add in the additinal establishing shots of her leaving the building
Some really good shots used and a sense of flow. The titles demonstrate creativity and skill. As a work in progress this has a lot of potential but runs the risk of not being finished in all aspects of technical skills - ensure this is completed to deadline.
ReplyDeleteTo improve:
Sound is your priority
Add the missing titles
Add in the additinal establishing shots of her leaving the building
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